TRICKLE (for 5th poetry contest)

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Permalink Reply by Linda on April 22, 2011 at 4:55pm

I LOVE IT!!  thanks for sharing, Genuine! ( you ARE fast!) ;-)

Permalink Reply by genuine, wwt, welcomer on May 22, 2011 at 4:31pm

Fast - yes, I did get this in almost immediately after the contest was posted ... is there a prize for that?  Just kidding .... it just happened to be coincidence that I was online when it was posted and had a few minutes to come up with something.

Permalink Reply by Mary Johnson on April 22, 2011 at 4:58pm

Very nice. genuine!

Permalink Reply by Deb~ Community Manager on April 22, 2011 at 4:59pm

Wonderful Genuine~ :o)

Permalink Reply by Effie Truver on April 22, 2011 at 8:30pm

Like the kicking part......very animating.

Permalink Reply by genuine, wwt, welcomer on April 28, 2011 at 11:55am

Thanks, Ladies

Permalink Reply by Perri Zepeda on April 29, 2011 at 7:02pm

I could relate to all you describe! Love "trickle"!

Permalink Reply by genuine, wwt, welcomer on May 22, 2011 at 4:29pm

when I was writing, I found "clearing away the debris of winter" to be my favorite line ....... the rain actually kind of does that; when the snow melts things are sort of dirty at first until the rain comes and washes things up a bit